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Sun Mar 16, 2008, 7:41 PM
Metal Sonic and the Kidnapping
Chapter 1
By: Amy Wheeler

Shadow, Amy Rose, and Big is walking down the road to Amy Rose’s house. Shadow balls up his fists.

“I hate Sonic. I will kill him one day.”
“Shadow, don’t say that. I love Sonic. He is the best. I am going to marry him.”
Amy Rose sighs and puts her hands over her heart.

“Sonic hates you. He’ll never marry you, Amy Rose. Except for in your dreams.”

Amy Rose starts crying.

“Shadow, that’s mean to say that. You can be such a jerk sometimes.”

Shadow starts holding the tearful Amy Rose.

“Don’t cry Amy Rose. I didn’t mean it. Please don’t cry.”

Suddenly, a scream is heard on down the road.

“Shadow, did you hear that?”
“Yes, I did.”
“We’ve got to go help them, Shadow. Don’t you think so too, Big?”
“Yes, we should.”
“All right, let’s go.”

When they got near the spot from where they heard the scream, they see Metal Sonic grabbing a red hedgehog.

“You will be my bride!”
“Never! You monster! My father is the king and when he hears about this, you will be punished! Let me go now!”
“Stop right there Metal Sonic! Release the little lady or else!”

Metal Sonic turns around.

“Well, well if its not Shadow and his little gang. You can’t stop me and if you try, you’ll pay dearly!”
“Bring it on Metal Sonic! I’m not scared of you.”

Metal Sonic throws the red hedgehog down. They start fighting. Metal Sonic is losing when all the sudden, he starts flying away.

“I will be back to finish this and I will win.”
“Thank you for helping me. By the way, my name is Angel.”
“Hi, my name is Amy Rose and this is Shadow and Big.”
“Oh, there is something I need to do.”

Angel walks up to Shadow and slaps him.

“Don’t you ever to me as a little lady again!! If you do, I will have my father behead you! I may be a lady but I am not little!”
“ok, ok I wouldn’t do it again, little lady. Oh great, here comes Sonic and his stupid little friends.”

Angel slaps Shadow again as Sonic, Knuckles, and Tails walks up to the group. Amy Rose starts laughing.

“What was all that commotion about that we heard?”
“None of your business!!”
“Shut up Shadow!”
“Make me.”
“OH, I WILL!!”
“Oh, will you guys shut up!! I can tell you. Some robot named Metal Sonic tried to kidnap me and make me his bride.”

Sonic turns around and sees the beautiful red hedgehog. He is amazed by her beauty.

“HIIII, I’mmmmmmm Sonicccccc. And I would be honored to know your name.”
“Angel, Princess Angel. I have heard many stories about your heroic deeds. I am honored to meet the great Sonic.”

Sonic turns red.

“It is nice to meet you, Princess Angel.”
“Call me Angel.”

Tails elbows Sonic.

“These are my friends, Tails and Knuckles.”

As they shake hands, they feel a shock go through them. Angel smiles at Sonic. Amy Rose sees this and gets jealous.

“Angel, may I ask you a question?”
“Sure Amy Rose. What is it?”
“Why are you going down the road to my house?”
“This is the road to your house?!! Crap! Oh, sorry didn’t mean to say that out loud. Can you tell me where to find Espio’s, Vector’s, and Charmy Bee’s house?”
“Why are you looking for them?”
“I need their help in finding out who kidnapped my friend Rachael. Maybe it was that robot?!”
“You’re a little too late to see them. They are closed. You can stay at my house for tonight. Come on.”
“Oh no, I couldn’t impose on you like that.”
“I insist you stay. Come along please. Let’s go. Bye Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles. See ya’ll tomorrow.”
“Ok. Bye Amy Rose and Angel. You too Big and Shadow.”
“Shut up Tails and go away.”

Amy Rose, Angel, and the guys start walking down the road though Amy Rose’s house. Angel stops and the rest keeps going on.

“Bye Angel. See you soon.”
“Bye Sonic. I hope so.”

And she runs to catch up. And Sonic and the rest head the opposite direction. They get to Amy Rose’s house and walk in.

“Sorry about the mess, Angel. Been too busy to clean the dishes up today.”
“It’s ok. I know how that is. I like to do everything myself. Sometimes my princess duties get in the way of cleaning my room.”

Amy Rose laughs and walks to a door and opens it.

“You can stay in this room tonight Angel. Shadow and Big can stay on the couches tonight and make sure Metal Sonic doesn’t come back. Right guys?”
“Yes, Amy Rose.”

Amy Rose goes to her door. She doesn’t want anyone to see all the pictures she has of Sonic in her room.

“Goodnight everyone.”
“Goodnight.”

They go to bed. In the middle of the night, the girls wake up to a loud noise. They run into the living room to check it out and saw Metal Sonic and Shadow fighting.

“Give me my bride now. She is mine.”
“In your dreams Metal Sonic.”

Shadow sees the girls.

“Hide now. I have things under control.”
“Doesn’t look like it.”

Metal Sonic sees Angel and tries to grap her. Amy Rose kicks him. Metal Sonic doesn’t feel it at all.

“GET OUT MY HOUSE NOW!!!”
“GIVE ME THE GIRL! SHE BELONGS TO ME!!”
“NO I DON’T! LEAVE ME ALONE!”

Metal Sonic laughs.

“Looks like I will have to kill your friend!!”

Angel looks shocked.

“No!!! Where are you holding her?”
“Come with me. I will show you.”
“Never Metal Sonic! LEAVE NOW!!”

Amy Rose kicks him again.

“You have done it now.”

Metal Sonic flies off out the door. Angel starts to cry.

;Poor Rachael. How am I going to help her now?!! He is going to kill her. We have to save her.”
“It’s ok Angel. He is not going to do anything to her. Let’s go back to bed. And in the morning, we will go to Espio’s, Vector’s, and Charmy Bee’s house. They will find Rachael.”

In the morning, they walk to their house.

“Good morning Angel.”
“Good Morning Sonic.”
“What’s wrong Angel?”
“Metal Sonic has my friend.”
“Morning Sonic, Amy Rose, Shadow, and Tails. How may we help you today?”
“Nothing but she does.”
“Hey, I’m Princess Angel. I need help finding my friend Rachael. Metal Sonic has taken her. Here is a picture of her. Can you help me?”
“Yes but it is going to be hard. Metal Sonic is a tricky one to find.”
“lease find her. I will give my hand in marriage to who ever rescues her.

Sonic’s eyes light up at hearing this. Amy Rose sees this and gets jealous.

“Angel, I will get her if these guys can find her. Shouldn’t be that hard. Metal Sonic is weak. Shadow can beat him.”
“Shut Up Sonic.”
“Give us a day Sonic. Do you have a place to stay nearby.”
“No. My father’s kingdom is really far away.”
“Angel you can stay with me till they find her. They are very good at that. Then Sonic and Shadow can rescue her. Right, guys?”
“I am not working with him!!”
“Yes ya’ll work together!! I said so.”

No one ever back talks Amy Rose when she uses that voice. They both nod yes knowing better than to say anything else.

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:iconangelgrannyrose:
Metal Sonic and the Kidnapping
Chapter 1
By: Amy Wheeler

Shadow, Amy Rose, and Big is walking down the road to Amy Rose’s house. Shadow balls up his fists.

“I hate Sonic. I will kill him one day.”
“Shadow, don’t say that. I love Sonic. He is the best. I am going to marry him.”
Amy Rose sighs and puts her hands over her heart.

“Sonic hates you. He’ll never marry you, Amy Rose. Except for in your dreams.”

Amy Rose starts crying.

“Shadow, that’s mean to say that. You can be such a jerk sometimes.”

Shadow starts holding the tearful Amy Rose.

“Don’t cry Amy Rose. I didn’t mean it. Please don’t cry.”

Suddenly, a scream is heard on down the road.

“Shadow, did you hear that?”
“Yes, I did.”
“We’ve got to go help them, Shadow. Don’t you think so too, Big?”
“Yes, we should.”
“All right, let’s go.”

When they got near the spot from where they heard the scream, they see Metal Sonic grabbing a red hedgehog.

“You will be my bride!”
“Never! You monster! My father is the king and when he hears about this, you will be punished! Let me go now!”
“Stop right there Metal Sonic! Release the little lady or else!”

Metal Sonic turns around.

“Well, well if its not Shadow and his little gang. You can’t stop me and if you try, you’ll pay dearly!”
“Bring it on Metal Sonic! I’m not scared of you.”

Metal Sonic throws the red hedgehog down. They start fighting. Metal Sonic is losing when all the sudden, he starts flying away.

“I will be back to finish this and I will win.”
“Thank you for helping me. By the way, my name is Angel.”
“Hi, my name is Amy Rose and this is Shadow and Big.”
“Oh, there is something I need to do.”

Angel walks up to Shadow and slaps him.

“Don’t you ever to me as a little lady again!! If you do, I will have my father behead you! I may be a lady but I am not little!”
“ok, ok I wouldn’t do it again, little lady. Oh great, here comes Sonic and his stupid little friends.”

Angel slaps Shadow again as Sonic, Knuckles, and Tails walks up to the group. Amy Rose starts laughing.

“What was all that commotion about that we heard?”
“None of your business!!”
“Shut up Shadow!”
“Make me.”
“OH, I WILL!!”
“Oh, will you guys shut up!! I can tell you. Some robot named Metal Sonic tried to kidnap me and make me his bride.”

Sonic turns around and sees the beautiful red hedgehog. He is amazed by her beauty.

“HIIII, I’mmmmmmm Sonicccccc. And I would be honored to know your name.”
“Angel, Princess Angel. I have heard many stories about your heroic deeds. I am honored to meet the great Sonic.”

Sonic turns red.

“It is nice to meet you, Princess Angel.”
“Call me Angel.”

Tails elbows Sonic.

“These are my friends, Tails and Knuckles.”

As they shake hands, they feel a shock go through them. Angel smiles at Sonic. Amy Rose sees this and gets jealous.

“Angel, may I ask you a question?”
“Sure Amy Rose. What is it?”
“Why are you going down the road to my house?”
“This is the road to your house?!! Crap! Oh, sorry didn’t mean to say that out loud. Can you tell me where to find Espio’s, Vector’s, and Charmy Bee’s house?”
“Why are you looking for them?”
“I need their help in finding out who kidnapped my friend Rachael. Maybe it was that robot?!”
“You’re a little too late to see them. They are closed. You can stay at my house for tonight. Come on.”
“Oh no, I couldn’t impose on you like that.”
“I insist you stay. Come along please. Let’s go. Bye Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles. See ya’ll tomorrow.”
“Ok. Bye Amy Rose and Angel. You too Big and Shadow.”
“Shut up Tails and go away.”

Amy Rose, Angel, and the guys start walking down the road though Amy Rose’s house. Angel stops and the rest keeps going on.

“Bye Angel. See you soon.”
“Bye Sonic. I hope so.”

And she runs to catch up. And Sonic and the rest head the opposite direction. They get to Amy Rose’s house and walk in.

“Sorry about the mess, Angel. Been too busy to clean the dishes up today.”
“It’s ok. I know how that is. I like to do everything myself. Sometimes my princess duties get in the way of cleaning my room.”

Amy Rose laughs and walks to a door and opens it.

“You can stay in this room tonight Angel. Shadow and Big can stay on the couches tonight and make sure Metal Sonic doesn’t come back. Right guys?”
“Yes, Amy Rose.”

Amy Rose goes to her door. She doesn’t want anyone to see all the pictures she has of Sonic in her room.

“Goodnight everyone.”
“Goodnight.”

They go to bed. In the middle of the night, the girls wake up to a loud noise. They run into the living room to check it out and saw Metal Sonic and Shadow fighting.

“Give me my bride now. She is mine.”
“In your dreams Metal Sonic.”

Shadow sees the girls.

“Hide now. I have things under control.”
“Doesn’t look like it.”

Metal Sonic sees Angel and tries to grap her. Amy Rose kicks him. Metal Sonic doesn’t feel it at all.

“GET OUT MY HOUSE NOW!!!”
“GIVE ME THE GIRL! SHE BELONGS TO ME!!”
“NO I DON’T! LEAVE ME ALONE!”

Metal Sonic laughs.

“Looks like I will have to kill your friend!!”

Angel looks shocked.

“No!!! Where are you holding her?”
“Come with me. I will show you.”
“Never Metal Sonic! LEAVE NOW!!”

Amy Rose kicks him again.

“You have done it now.”

Metal Sonic flies off out the door. Angel starts to cry.

;Poor Rachael. How am I going to help her now?!! He is going to kill her. We have to save her.”
“It’s ok Angel. He is not going to do anything to her. Let’s go back to bed. And in the morning, we will go to Espio’s, Vector’s, and Charmy Bee’s house. They will find Rachael.”

In the morning, they walk to their house.

“Good morning Angel.”
“Good Morning Sonic.”
“What’s wrong Angel?”
“Metal Sonic has my friend.”
“Morning Sonic, Amy Rose, Shadow, and Tails. How may we help you today?”
“Nothing but she does.”
“Hey, I’m Princess Angel. I need help finding my friend Rachael. Metal Sonic has taken her. Here is a picture of her. Can you help me?”
“Yes but it is going to be hard. Metal Sonic is a tricky one to find.”
;Please find her. I will give my hand in marriage to who ever rescues her.

Sonic’s eyes light up at hearing this. Amy Rose sees this and gets jealous.

“Angel, I will get her if these guys can find her. Shouldn’t be that hard. Metal Sonic is weak. Shadow can beat him.”
“Shut Up Sonic.”
“Give us a day Sonic. Do you have a place to stay nearby.”
“No. My father’s kingdom is really far away.”
“Angel you can stay with me till they find her. They are very good at that. Then Sonic and Shadow can rescue her. Right, guys?”
“I am not working with him!!”
“Yes ya’ll work together!! I said so.”

No one ever back talks Amy Rose when she uses that voice. They both nod yes knowing better than to say anything else.

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welcome to dA^^

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:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
FAKE FRIENDS never ask for food...
...REAL FRIENDS are the reason you have no food.

FAKE FRIENDS call your parents Mr./Mrs...
...REAL FRIENDS call your parents Dad/Mom.

FAKE FRIENDS will bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong...
...REAL FRIENDS would sit next to you saying "Dang, we screwed up...but that was fun!"

FAKE FRIENDS never see you cry...
...REAL FRIENDS cry with you.

FAKE FRIENDS borrow your stuff for a few days, then give it back...
...REAL FRIENDS keep your stuff so long they forget it's yours.

FAKE FRIENDS know a few things about you....
...REAL FRIENDS could write a book about you.

FAKE FRIENDS will leave you behind if that is what the whole crowd is doing...
...REAL FRIENDS will kick the whole crowd's butt.

FAKE FRIENDS knock on your front door...
...REAL FRIENDS walk right in and say "I'M HOME!"

FAKE FRIENDS will take your drink away when they think you've had enough...
...REAL FRIENDS will look at you stumbling drunk all over the place and say, "Drink the rest of that, you know we don't waste."

FAKE FRIENDS will talk smack to the person who talks smack about you...
..REAL FRIENDS will kick the crap out of them.

BUT MOST OF ALL:
FAKE FRIENDS are for a while...
...REAL FRIENDS are for life.

If you get this then you are a real friend to me! Send this to all of your friends; if they send it back then they're a real friend too.

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ooooooohhhhhhhhh thats me love ur sis

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:iconangelgrannyrose:
sup sis i am crazy

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:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
:glomp: :hug: :cuddle: Hi!

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hey i ain't got no tattoos

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:iconlunarmaddnesslives6:
La de la, Amy's a freaking goth. With a tattoo and all that jazz. La de la. [link]

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Amy! I'm gonna spam your page with useless words! Yay!

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Hi! New here, huh? Welcome to DA. Thanx for the watch.

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